Someone I know is teaching a writing course and wanted to show the class the power of the verb. He showed me what he will be presenting to them as proof and I think it's pretty great:
He noticed. He stared. She noticed. She smiled. He approached. She rebuffed. He offered. She accepted. He said, she said, he said, she said. They drank. They said. They drank. He touched. She laughed. They danced. He pressed. She kissed. They left. They did. He left. She slept.
He called. He called. He called. He begged. She refused. He called. He wrote. He visited. He called, called, called, called. She reported. He arrived, shouted, vowed, departed. He plotted. He waited. He visited. She gasped. He demanded. She refused. He grabbed. She screamed. He slapped. She ran, locked, called, waited. He panicked. He fled, hid, failed.
She accused. He denied. She described. He denied. She won, he lost. They aged. She wed, reproduced, parented, saddened, divorced. He bided, waited, hardened. Fought. Smoked. Plotted, planned. Escaped. Vanished.
They lived. She thrived, he faded. He wandered; she traveled. They encountered.
He sat, she sat, they ignored. He noticed. She noticed. He gaped. She jumped. She warned, he assured her. She reminded, he admitted. She threatened, he promised. She considered. She sat. She asked. He told. He asked. She told. He smoked. She smoked. He apologized. She cried. He explained. He begged. He pleaded. She considered, resolved, refused. He stood. He clenched. He perspired. He spat. She flinched, paled.
He stopped. He slumped. He collapsed. She stood. She pitied. She left.
They lived. They forgot. They died.
- J. Robert Lennon
long day.
6 hours ago



4 comments:
love it
yeah. that's great!
Yep, love it.
Wow!
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